3 comments on “Antikythera

  1. Ahh, yes… the final 3 paragraphs. I could’ve done a better job explaining what happened there. Maybe I’ll go back through and re-edit it to make it more clear, but in short…Evangelina stabs Leonis’ from behind in an attempt to protect her young lover. Leonis spins around, striking out at his attacker. It isn’t until he is burning on the ground that he realizes it was her, and that he has killed the woman he came to protect.

    • After talking this over with Amy, she didn’t get the intended ending either. I will rewrite to make it more clear. Thanks for the feedback, Grandma. I missed the mark on that one.

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